Friday, 16 April 2010

Treatment Re-draft.

We've got together and looked at the treatment and first storyboard that we did, form the time we have left to film, edit and finish everything we went through how we would and could have done things, with the time left we adapted the treatment:


TREATMENT 2.

A delirious pilot is trying to make sense of what he sees before him after falling from his plane.

His vision blurs and his breathing becomes gradually heavier. Beams of light stream past him as he tumbles toward the ground.

His vision kaleidoscopes as he sees past events from his life. A woman on a beach, it is his mother. He calls to her, but she does not hear. His childhood, sand, holidays and happiness flash before him, he sees contentment.

He regains conciousness to find himself looking and trying to make sense of a woman’s torso, he is attracted to her and wishes to touch her but is unable to see her face.

He is pulled back violently as a force draws him away from the woman. He feels alone.

He finds himself in a dark enclosure, it is cold and he hears the sound of dogs barking.

He looks up and a dog surrounds him, he is scared despite how harmless the dog looks, he throws liver to the dog which he finds in his pocket.

His vision blurs, the dog duplicates and he is aware of memories from his past again. As if a book or cupboard is being opened he is flooded with these memories, all to fast to comprehend.

His mind takes him back to the beach and standing there is a young girl, much like the girl resounding in his dreams. He is unable to figure out how many of these girls there are.

He passes out.



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